SUSY (Let's All Make Believe)

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There's something in these physics amiss,
something improper in her kiss,
something imperfect about her lips,
something faulty that preexists;
and I can only wish
that it's the sort of flaw that persists,
in the face of supersymmetrical laws
and idealized physics.

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 15 years ago
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Nice. Concise and very suggestive. It reminded me of a former object of my desire who was born with a cleft lip that was corrected through surgey but never fully invisible. It gave her such a unique sensuous beauty because she knew how to smile both before and after the surgery. What a delight it is to find the erotic in each other's so-called imperfections. I thought more, however, of evolutionary psychology, rather than physics. The former tends to reduce the sensual to a subliminal desire to procreate perfection.