sveltwalker: my button says "rewind

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upload of passion #1

moments of becoming, transition

almost always
as intense as
the after

childbirth
labor

disrobe from white terry
slip into champagne glass
bubble bath

take me back
to the before
the slip in dive under

zipper pull
finger free
cock tumble
breath approaching

hit rewind
again

to shoes removed
before carpet walking
sizzle scrape of garlic sauté

hollow boot steps on wooden staircase

hit remind
again

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Lalenya LoveLalenya Lovealmost 20 years ago
I love this, but...

I had to report it, as there is _no way_ I would consider it non-erotic; this definitely belongs in the "Erotic Poetry" category! Beautiful flow and lovely imagery; keep writing!

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Hit remind

An interesting approach.

One many wish to do,

but life won't allow.

The best you can do is

"hit remind".

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