- Erotic Poetry
- Swallowed
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A red head from the Netherlands
Had verbal skills, oral talents
She savoured a lick
And lips on a prick
Swallowed fluids from the penile glans.
- COMMENTS
buttersabout 13 years agoa limerick tends to hit or miss depending on how well the author keeps to the rhythm integral to the form, as well as the rhyme scheme. this might have worked better if more attention had been paid to these points. having said that, it's possible english is not your native tongue and that this was an attempt at something quite new to you as a writer. :)
Maria2394about 13 years agowith UYS on this one as well. If you meant it as a limerick, you missed the mark.
UnderYourSpellabout 13 years agoI presume this is an attempt at a Limerick, I say attempt because it isn't
