Sweet Man

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Recidiva
Recidiva
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If I could do it again I’d choose moments to dip my mind into
Like fingers into a brook in summer.

I’d lay back on the cool stone and watch the clouds go by
I’d reach into all the times we touched and remember.

Knowing now what you were thinking then
Only makes it richer to me as time goes by.

Layer upon layer of love, turned and refolded upon itself
Each glance with secret meaning.

Sometimes on my face there’s nothing but a smile
But inside I’m remembering trembles and sighs

The time I spend missing you I replay each moment
And plan new ones, stacking carefree and careless with careful and wise.

When you’re gone I can imagine you the way I choose.
Until I can touch you and my imagination flies.

If I can’t show you, I’ll tell you, and if I can’t tell you, I’ll dream.
As the time slips through my fingers.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Lovely

Warm, sensual imagery. I'm glad I discovered your poetry.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 18 years ago
really nice poem

"And plan new ones, stacking carefree and careless with careful and wise." Great line!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
mentioned

this poem was mentioned in the thread, "New Poems Reviews"

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
sweet poem

your passion was pen well and painted a very poetic image. Passing the time (~_~)

fieryjenfieryjenabout 18 years ago
Beautiful

As I said, I have no clue about poem writing, so I'm not even going to try and pick this one apart in any way. I like it better whole anyway :)

It did speak to me in a most enjoyable manner, so thank you very much. I'll be going to read your other poems now.

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