- Erotic Poetry
- Sweet Salty Tears
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Click hereSalty sweet tears
Pool and form
Silent puddles
Desire filled lakes
Lush and deep
Surroundings
Hushed
Rich greens
Deep Blues
Moist and rare
Trust in you
Do I dare?
Salty sweet tears
Of love
New and fair
Easy
Determined
Time
Thunders in
Slow
The way
How we begin.
Salty sweet tears
Mending hearts
Baffling trust
To give
Not a sin
Still I battle
Here
I pray
No longer to win.
Salty sweet tears
I cry today
My heart
Fills with joy
Truth is shown
To think
Is not the way.
Salty sweet tears
Lead me to you
Slowly I open
Listening
Whispering
An answer
The secret
Kept
By two.
Salty sweet tears
Immersed
Trusting
A final breathe I take
Slowly I sink
Drowned in the lake.
Salty Sweet tears…
My heart will you break?
DLT © July 9 2004
- COMMENTS
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agovery unique and original, endearing, and twisting~
sweet salty tears is relateable, and the ending was
a twist I didn't expect...awesome~
Christina O. Leighover 19 years agoVery good read. I think it would've been a little better if you would take the one line singular words and match them with the other. If that makes sense. I think it would've flowed much better. Over-all, you did great :)
