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Click hereWith lawyer lips,
cunning caress of words,
slithering whispers of love
I'm drawn close.
Like prey,
with your hypnotic eyes,
lurring me with perfumed promises.
Revisions now haunting,
subtle words with intent,
"just let me love you"
you meant, "let me fuck you"
Worthwhile injustice?
Satisfaction presumed,
slide away with your hissing smile.
A cobra's dance,
Leave me
with lingering poison,
lungs heavy,
heart paralyzed.
So many faces
behind your green eyes,
eloquent beauty,
before transformation.
your shedding of skin.
Closing my eyes,
remembering faces,
glimpses of truth,
as the skin you're now wearing
sheds a lifetime of hell.
...improvement in your poetry is so obvious. Every piece of verse gets clearer and cleaner!
Each write gets better fawnie, I really like the phrasing throughout this poem. I couldn't quote which one was the best as they were all equally fantastic. Snakes are great metaphors.