Sweetly

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Hold me
And fold me
Into your cold;
It's too much to ask
That you ever be warm.

Boldly
And lonely
Into this hallway;
Everpresent ghosts
Of my dead empty soul.

Face me
Erase me
Completely negate me;
Tell me you love me
And turn me away.

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WhiteWave48WhiteWave48over 16 years ago
Beautiful but sad

This poem established itself so distinctly on the page as the pattern of ideas developed, yet it left such a poignant feeling of loss and despair.

WickedEveWickedEveover 16 years ago
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I usually don't poems with "soul." But that first stanza is really good. Not a bad poem at all! Thank you for sharing it. :) I'll be mentioning your poem on the literotica poetry forum.

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