Swishing Tales

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He’ll buck like a stallion
nostrils searching for scent
muscles quivering under blankets
you’ll wantonly rub up against

He’ll stomp the ground excitedly
and gallop your heart away
the smell of sweet musk compelling
knees to spread further each day

He’ll land you bareback
and leave you short of breath
leather twisted round fingers
and thighs, dripping wet

He’ll take you for a ride
so don’t be lead astray
the boy is a play park pony
full on trampled hay

He’ll prance in carousels
and parade through fables
of grasps at golden rings
while tied to his stable

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
THE MESSAGE INTENDED WAS THREE FOLD

THE BUCKING HORSE IN A BAR, A CIRCUS OR FAIR, AND A DUDE RANCH. TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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very tight writing, last eight lines rise above ordinary

whoa! like this

"the boy is a play park pony

full on trampled hay"

I did not notice at first that you slip in and out of rhyme, is there a reason for it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
have not

tried writing about a horse tale...but, I like the way you played with the idea ..bluerains

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Giddy up!

Such a naughty horse! I think he caught your scent...

Fly

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
I AGREE

with LeBroz...

was not wanting the

ride to end...

*winks*

saddle up girl,

and go with it !

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