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Click hereSilky and lite
creamy and white
beautiful petals of my passion
With your sweet sexy smell
the darkness you dispel
as your loveliness wraps around me
Firm to the touch
I love you so much
My sweet flower of the south
You brighten my day
with your lovely display
Magnolia you have stolen my heart.
I truly pray you are a sister of the south because you
write it so well. This was a cool form and a beautiful
poem for me. The rhyming lines need a little help.
I love to rhyme and it does cost you some votes from time to
time. So what, this is a good poem a lovely visional, but
I would play with the rhyme lines as far as count. Please
write more, maybe something with a mint julip and a heavy
heart.