Take Down

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A short sharp dare to be dominated.
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See the challenge in my eyes
Dark chocolate sparks
"Not feeling quite so submissive now, are we?"

Feeling revved up
Juiced up
Energy crackling
Muscles tensed
Adrenalin pumping
Ready to pounce

F
I
G
H
T

M
E

Don't hold back
I'm not a china doll
Give me all your energy
Smash it into mine

Chase me
FIGHT ME
Kicking and screaming all the way
Let me disrespect you
Let me spit obscenities at you
Let me show you the vicious beast inside

Then...

TAKE
ME
DOWN

Push my head to the ground
Grind your foot into my face
Laugh at my vicious curses
Force me into my place

Feel the energy humming inside me
And then rain down your blows
Fire up my body
Until it hits fever pitch
Over and over and over and over
FIGHT ME!

Force me into submission
A place where I normally beg to be
Not tonight
I don't want to take my natural place
Tonight I need brute force
And I won't go down easy
Expect me to fight back

Bind me
Slap me
Bite me
Nip me
Scratch me
Whip me
Cane me
Crop me
Paddle me
Spit on me
Humiliate me
Scare me
Threaten me
Make me beg for more, more, more

Make me cry because it hurts so good

C.A.T.H.A.R.S.I.S

LET
ME
FLY

And when it's over....

When it's over walk away and make me crawl to you
Make me crawl and worship your feet
While you decide how I should show my gratitude for your care

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Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 7 years ago
this is a BDSM CLASSIC : a foray into Leopold vonMasoch's tortured mind !!!! Bravo:

5-ed and Fave-ed........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
one a day

don't make us cry more then once

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