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oxalis
oxalis
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all that skin
the soft stuff
hairless and nearly so
smooth, the word
the popularity
the clutch
a pink reddening between
slap and happy

selfish words
points on
finger print proof

oxalis
oxalis
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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Yes, a subtle

eroticism here. Some intriguing wordplay. very good.

jim :)

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
I agree with SandSpike--

I think it is erotic too, I never know which to put some of my poems in, but I think anything that has slap and happy and something about fur or pink anything should be dropped into the erotic pile.

What are the criteria? Should we start a thread? There probably has been one already. Why I type such long PC's to people who have already read a poem is beyond me.

sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
I think this is erotic

maybe I'm getting kinky in my older age.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
taking it

I'm taking it -- your slap and happy that is. I want to write a spanking poem called slap happy. lol You don't mind if I swipe your words, do you, oxy woxy? :)

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