tagErotic PoetryTaking the Sixth

Taking the Sixth

byKoba©

Will you commit anarchy with me?
Break the commandments within,
set in an earlier lifetime
by those who know nothing of you and me.

Would you run from me,
if you knew for sure
that the portions of pleasure we divide
would be subtracted from our shares in Paradise?

I would like to beat you
into forgetting yourself.
Will you accept my open hand
that I offer in burning red?

Will you come to me, to a place
where the Law can't touch you?
Will you come with me to forget
and to experience a flight to freedom?

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