- Erotic Poetry
- tandem universe
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Click herefall into me
from the universe
unlocked
paint the inside
of my sky
with your
reflection
unlease the Thunder
of our hearts in echos
across the seas of Oceania
where the ancient halls
transcend
the centuries of our lives
and the fossiled
mirrors on the wall
merge into the cracks
of one perfect
love....
- COMMENTS
YDDalmost 20 years agoThe phrases flow very smoothly in transition
from sight to sound to time.
It is hard to choose a favorite image.
A good read.
Liaralmost 20 years ago...is quite easy to mess up, and make cosmically and comically tacky. But here it works really well. :)
Merrymakeralmost 20 years agoThis works so well. I really like "Paint the inside of my sky"....nicely done!
~Merry
