- Erotic Poetry
- TASTE
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Click hereSubtle tickle
against my lips
world rocking, rolling
like vertigo, I spin dizzily.
The power of your presence
parallel to mine
is like a blow,
The weight of a world
restricts, restrains
breath coming in hisses
a staccato arrhythmia
that has me breathing you
all higher brain function,
frazzled by electric shocks
primeval preferences and
animalistic desires unlock
crashed thoughts spin,
like a carnival ride,
you freeze me in this moment
on a whim
where I urge you taste my lips
or let me taste yours.
Bound as I am, I am
forfeit to your desires
use me as you will
Sight black cloth only
no vision
tense suspense, cloying
along with the scent of
candles and sex
I can feel your presence
weight settling over me,
the pop of springs
drowning me in desire
A nail dragged,
lips bitten,
you,
tantalize, tease, torture,
thoughts tormented with lust
I thrust the air
As if it will submit to my needs
You have a taste for this
It whets your carnality
before
impaling our desires in
a mutual moan of surrender
- COMMENTS
Trixareforkidsalmost 10 years agoI thrust the air
As if it will submit to my needs
Gives both a picture and a feeling. Great work!
Angelineover 10 years agosome really good images and the alliteration is not overpowering. It does go on rather long which is not necessarily a bad thing but you might want to start looking at a poem a week or two after you write it to see if there is anything you want to change or cut. I often find that a little space leads me to see where I can lose unnecessary words or tighten up the language overall. It's like the difference between diluting and concentrating: concentrated is more powerful.
Just my opinion and thanks for sharing it. :)
erectus123over 10 years agonice change of pace, well written, strong vocabulary.
