Tasting Y O U

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Awake,
yet dreaming.
Feeling your essence
p u l l
me in.

Can I drink you,
swallow you whole?
Taste you
outside in.

Fornicating thoughts
tremble ... shake.
Setting the pace,
ass sitting on
f a c e.

Single digits
d i p
one by one.

Scheming a
skimming
of tongue trails,
as dew drops
slurp.
In then
o u t.

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sacksackover 18 years ago
a fun and delicious poem.......

Sure beats apple juice for breakfast!!!

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
What a Dream

If all my dreams were like this, I'd never wake up.

cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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The thing that struck me most about this poem is the intimacy it achieves with just a few well chosen words. i.e. 'Single digits dip one by one'

Well done RF.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
you have a real eye

for winks and thrills...bluerains

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
uh.....BREATHLESS !!!!

"Can I drink you,

swallow you whole?

Taste you

outside in".

WOW !

My fav line,

"Taste you outside in"..

and again and again... mmmm.

delicious thoughts, and most

vivid images .. You have AWED me !

sGp

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