tattoos (for the women poets)

I'm not a woman, but I'm thinking of tatooing (is that a word?) this poem on my ass.

I am not a woman poet, not even a woman. Still, I thank you for this poem, at least the first two stanzas (along with those others who already have. For all you know they could be tattod AND poet women. You'll have to write another poem for this contigency.

I know you tried to do something original in the last stanza and maybe you have. it just did not quite work for me as the first part of the poem. The reason: it feels too much like an experimentation in creative poem writing, as oppose to the first part which was creative poem writing...

hmmm wondering what folds of flesh you are hiding such a message under...

interesting poem, can be read many ways, not sure if I should giggle or slap you, I think I will giggle, why not? It was a funny poem :)

This was really clever and put a huge smile on My face tonight. For about five minutes. Then, I thought twice about getting the tattoo I wanted - a long stemmed, black rose {right above My left breast}. And then I read your poem again and thought, "it will look great - for a few years. Then you're going to gain a ton of weight and the tattoo will look like a looooong black hose to clean out a ceptic system sitting on your down-to-your-elephant- ankles boob". It was scary. But I still loved the poem and especially wanted to thank you for the warning before it was too late for Me. <grinnin'>

UNtattoed Vixxx

butterflies can certainly go through stages on the skin too. the balloon butterfly can now be found in all tattoo parlars in various stages......*LOL*......i enjoyed this.....!!!.....don