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Tear Me Down

bySafe_Bet©

Hot tongues swirl thru pools
of joyously swapped spit.
Losing emotional control,
she forecloses on my soul.

I need her hot fuck;
the passion beyond lust,
where minds are useless
and only spasms exist.

Want to be torn down -
urban renewal of my id;
then rebuilt as a monument
to all that is orgasmic.

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