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Click heredraped over like the sheet on the bed
my leg glides over yours
fingers trapped
entangled, interlaced, in each other
like the rope between my hands
contracting
clenching
bringing you further
deeper
closer
connection
I like how it ends with connection and, yeah, drop "over" in the first line.
The only thing that could have made this even better would be if the poet had caught the repetition of over in the opening. Sure, there's some small use of popular phrasing in this but I really think the cliche is balanced by the unique view and well-written bondage theme. It's good.