- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Technicolor Betty Paige
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Ocean tides eternal tumble
Coax the moon out to play
Evening casts her cool gaze
Towards fevered days end
Refreshed and full of promise
Hours move in slow seduction
Night-blooming jasmine robes the air
In exotic film-noir style
Shady dame, an enticing dream
Littered in corsets, seamed stockings, and Mary Jane heels
Single malt and perfect lipstick at the ready
Invitation, but an eyelash away......
Senses always reel this loop
Each time she rides the current back
Full of electric spice and life
My Technicolor Betty Paige.
8/04
- COMMENTS
Maria2394over 19 years agogoing to quote that same line, very well done MM, some new phrasing, great images and I am a huge fan of film noir, love this poem!!!
annaswirlsover 19 years agoHey- T used the same quote!
Night-blooming jasmine robes the air
In exotic film-noir style
I personally was attracted to the film-noir style, it set the mood with so few words. Perfect
annaswirlsover 19 years ago"Night-blooming jasmine robes the air
In exotic film-noir style"
This is so impressive I will say it twice.
This is so impressive.
Such that it leaves me breaking my own rule of not using the word "so"
I do not know Betty Paige. But she is proud.
~anna
Tathagataover 19 years ago~Night-blooming jasmine robes the air
In exotic film-noir style~
I love " robes the air"
great phrase
~Shady dame, an enticing dream
Littered in corsets, seamed stockings, and Mary Jane heels
Single malt and perfect lipstick at the ready
Invitation, but an eyelash away......~
and that is so very film noir
I'd really like to meet this woman
: )
~Senses always reel this loop
Each time she rides the current back
Full of electric spice and life
My Technicolor Betty Paige.~
This last verse makes me think maybe it is a real person you are remembering?
Or a movie clip..
Either way i loved this
whoever or whatever the inspiration was...it must be something
Thank you
