- Non-Erotic Poetry
- tectonics
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Click hereall the rocks
insistent in their geology
couldn’t be still enough
to buoy my being
when your smile
slips off my shoulders
and tickles in tendrils
eroding with insist
pull the alarm
and sound
for the majesty
of darkened entwine
lifting until scream
pushing until ahhhh
and never letting
silent knowledge of my love
fracture
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 20 years agoThat was supposed to be 100% Sorry about that. I really DID like it!
Thesandman
Anonymousabout 20 years agoVery well done, and heartfelt. Thank you.
I remain, Thesandman
YDDabout 20 years ago"Buoy my being" is a fine phrase and image.
The first three stanzas use alliteration nicely.
I like the first half of the poem quite a bit.
The second half gives me problems in following your thought
and connecting it strongly with the opening.
And it is a harsher read since you have avoided similar sounds.
I would guess that this was a purposeful choice.
WickedEveabout 20 years agoOne tiny suggestion: try ahhh in italics. I think it may work better.
annaswirlsabout 20 years agoconvection current
of molten magma
moves these plates
your way
damn, geology will never be the same
Miss Cordelia, mistress of the word
I think you have inspired me
