Tell Me?

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It's like smothering a fire with petrol.
It's like inducing a wound to bleed even more.

It's like living in a world that wants you gone.
It's like being in a body that hates you back.

It's not like that cliche starry night sky.
It's not like the snow on your tongue.

It's not like that wide open summer field.
It's not like the sound of gravel underfoot.

22/2/07

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Tell you — what? It sounds like a nightmare universe you've created.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Well...

you'll have to "Tell Me"...because I don't know. Maybe you used too much petrol or needed too much intravenous blood.. I don't know and it'll probably bug me all day now. So at least you gave me food for thought.