Tell Me

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DonnaBeck
DonnaBeck
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tell me again why you love me
I do not wish to seem vain, indulgent, needy
but I forget sometimes
when life is difficult

tell me again why you love me
because you are so clever
if you love me it must be true
I am lovable indeed

your words can be my elixir
your gaze has been my solace
your arms are my haven

tell me again why you love me
even when I can't believe your reasons
I know that you don't lie
I can feel that I am loved

tell me once more why you love me
please do not grow weary
I need to hear it sometimes
and it is best coming from you

DonnaBeck
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KingCuddleKingCuddleover 6 years ago
Simple, straightforward...

...and Heartfelt!

I believe it. Makes me want to say it!

lorencinolorencinoabout 7 years ago
Not needy, playful is the key

We are all vulnerable people to some degree and it is not necessarily to the extent of making an all-inclusive characterization that describes the complete person.

I find the poem balanced and aware. It is the equivalent of asking for a hug. Who can put a limit on how many times you need a hug or how many times you need to hear “I love you?”

The poem contains a combination of needs expressed and expressions of awareness so all told it is a sweet glimpse at a person in a loving relationship. I like the poem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Brilliant

Poignant and absolutely dead on perfect!

gemman1gemman1over 9 years ago
Very Nice

My wife asks that questions occasionally. I tell her I love her every day and every night. She is the light in my darkness, the soft place I go to fall.

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
So needy

Can an insecure person be made to feel secure by words? Oh, the pain of being in love! Succinct verse revealing that, despite her protestations, she really is needy.

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