- Erotic Poetry
- Temptation
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Her skin is soft
So soft, and so cold
Her body is displayed
For him to behold
Arms at her sides
Smile on her face
His eyes are hungry,
His will a disgrace
He strokes her hair
Closes her eyes
Kisses her lips...
Spreads her thighs
He climbs upon the cold hard steel
Being inside her is simply unreal.
She opens her eyes
He licks her neck
Its such a shame he has to cash her check
When they are finished, no words are said
Cause its still hard to say goodbye,
Even when shes dead.
- COMMENTS
buttersover 14 years agoyour poem has been reviewed as one of today's new poems at Lit. you can read what I've said here:
http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=32516444&postcount=2883
it might not be the best piece in the world but it was worth a mention. some weren't. my opinions only and no reflection on what any other poet thinks on the forums. :)
