my mind was so crowded with words
like legion
they flowed out of my eyes
blinding me
she took her blade
cut away
she pointed
"look"
"learn"
my vision, freed
crisp edges
clean form
a face without cosmetics
beauty
I bowed to my teacher
an eyebrow raised
tiny smile
"you still have much to learn"
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