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- That Night
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Click hereA vision of beauty.
A vision of the night.
I was lost in your trance,
hidden from the light.
With a heart as dark
as a moonless night,
you preyed upon me
with pure delight.
In an deadly embrace
you held me tight,
and stole my heart
that fateful night
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YDDalmost 20 years agoThat Night
You have the rhymes of a fair, but simple little poem.
However, you tend to lose the rhythm as your meter changes.
Short works like this are much stronger
when both rhyme and meter are consistent.
