- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Air Takes Me Away
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Click hereTHE AIR TAKES ME AWAY
You are anonymous
As always
And effervescent
From the rays
Brought about by your light
The tone
In a perfect atmosphere,
How did this come to be?
My heart is free
And my spirit
Spread throughout-
There is no substitute.
But the poem
Leaves something behind
Omnipotent to leave a chill
When thrown into the wind
As its resting place.
It gets no better!
- COMMENTS
Maria2394almost 20 years agoI do agree, this one is different in that, it seems more thought out, more reflective, I cant grasp the correct word at this moment, but this poem shows enormous growth ins a short time, very good work :)
twelveoonealmost 20 years agoDon't kid yourself, you did
"The tone
In a perfect atmosphere,
How did this come to be?"
this is very nice, if only you could leave out the the "p" words.
tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago...is different in tone and structure from the others of yours I have seen, and I like it very much. Enjoyed mightily.
