- Erotic Poetry
- The Arch
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Click hereThe naked back,
the arch
and curve
of the waist,
the breasts
and nipples tight,
the neck,
head thrown back
my hips spasm
my own back arches
an arc of cum
shines over your skin
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 18 years agoA little tighter;
could yield great impact.
Could work it with just the first two "the's."
Welcome to Lit and looking forward to more from you...
Jennifer Cover 18 years agoThe The's aside I enjoyed your
poem.
I do agree with blue though,
you could cut a few of them
out.
Keep writing and posting!
Anonymousover 18 years agotoo many THEs..you can compress this one more imho....and I liked the theme...blue
