- Erotic Poetry
- the bath towel
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the bath towel on your head
a few drops shine
you stand next to the bed
in the fainting light
you eye
the mountain on the table
of cold meats
tomatoes
juicy fruit
cream
bottles waiting for their turn
and you ask
are we besieged
yes
hide under my
friday night tent
roll in like a toy train
maneuver around the
station
but ooh slowly
you're leaking fuel
around the intramural fires
wh
2006-11-26
- COMMENTS
WickedEveover 17 years agoThese lines are extremely erotic and really well written:
bottles waiting for their turn
and you ask
are we besieged
yes
hide under my
friday night tent
roll in like a toy train
maneuver around the
station
but ooh slowly
you're leaking fuel
around the intramural fires
Maria2394over 17 years agoan intelligent comment, but you would point out I am wrong on anything I say, so I just say, this is one of your better ones, I enjoyed it. sorry for the meaningless fluff of a comment--
maria
RhymeFairyover 17 years agoVery sensual read here. With images that make the lil train that could ... steam~ Love your playful write ...
*flowers*
