- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Bloom
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the un-thought of
burried a seed,
deep in nothing
time sprout a life
to reach into the unknowing
dark grime and essence of life
absorbent of it's enviorment
growing learning seeking
stronger
and larger
gripping it's place in life
swelling in it's offerings
sprouting into the world
punching a hole
into existence
rising from the earth
reaching for warmth
and reception
blown by critical wind
dodging imprintation
from the wake of the passer by
enduring sun and rain
drought, flood and time
growing reaching budding
till a bloom blossoms
a piece of natural Art
in hopes of one ... perhaps one
may smell of it's aroma
and dabble in it's essence
to pollinate inspiration
a moment of beauty
to relish in one moment
whats been for some time
the natural urge to produce
recognition in a burst
the blooming!
- COMMENTS
Du Lacover 19 years agohow I feel about this one Art.. I love it... feel it...and so enjoy it...
du lac
twelveooneover 19 years agoExcuse me for using the "V" word, this needs a bit of clarification, it is as if you are playing with words, but couldn't decide where to go."time sprout a life" is a great line, after that, I cannot decide what the intent is.
"un-thought of" I am unsure of this. I like the idea of un-thought (zen) but again it is not clear, if this is the idea you are playing with.
"the un-thought of
burried a seed,
deep in nothing
time sprout a life"
WickedEveover 19 years agoThere are a few of those, but I'll just mention the content instead.
"to pollinate inspiration"
"recognition in a burst
the blooming!"
Some very good lines there. :)
