tagErotic Poetrythe boiling ice cream

the boiling ice cream

bySenna Jawa©

        everything's logical
        everything falls into the right place
        the critical stage is far away
        the peace can be told from the sadness

        are you good at having good time
        my friend because if not then forget
        it she said
        i did and i have excellent time since then

        everything's paralogical
        everything's here or there
        the critical stage is reached
        the happiness can't be told from depression




wlodzimierz holsztynski ©
      1983-sept

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