The Bullnettle Flower

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foehn
foehn
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The blossom of the bullnettle
is whiter by far than any honeysuckle flower
and smells much sweeter
but the perfume is made brittle

by the fact that the spines
at the base of the bloom
are longer than the petals and loom
toward the nose, full of poison.

“Te extraño,” I told her.
“Oh, don’t bring that mess up again,” she said.
At first it merely hurts. All in the head,
they say, the long itching, after.


~

foehn
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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
Oh BULL ...

NETTLE? Hehehey! nice poem fohen

this poem was as lovely as the scent

of a bullnettle <grin>

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
And I

enjoyed the first two stanzas more than the last!

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 19 years ago
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the last verse is very strong, especially the last lines, I longed for more tightness in the verses above, but having said that, this is a poem that I really enjoyed!

DeepAsleepDeepAsleepabout 19 years ago
This poem...

Oh, this poem. It's mentioned in the new poetry reviews.

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