The Cabin & The Cowboy

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Twined.
Our Bodies Spent.
Glowing.
Damp.
“No more,”
I say, then you softly touch me.
Kissing my neck, tenderly passing my shoulders...
caresses across my arms...gliding down past all memory..
“No...” I begin, but you touch me, my breasts & nipples arise
“Moooore...” I end
You touch me, your mouth melded on me in places warm and wet .

Sensual,
Unrestricted nakedness,
Erotic skin,
My breasts slide along his sides.
Feline,
Claws out,
Arched back,
His body trembles under my sharpened nails.
Offered,
Eyelids closed,
Mouth opened,
His hands climb along my thighs.
Opened,
Smooth wet,
Lips spread,
His sex plunges passionately into me.
Given up,
Sublimated body,
Ecstasy fusion,
Love quivers in the deepest of me.

“MORE!” whispered hungrily
Aching. Pulsing. Probing.
You enter me.
Wildly dancing inside with me.
Filling my senses.
Fulfilling my fantasies.
“NO More “
I say, but then you touch me...

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Only slight criticism is in choice of words;

Instead of, "His sex," try just saying, "He."

The other way sounds so contrived,

Like a romance novel trying to not be crude.