The candle light dances

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The candlelight dances
off your gentle skin
and all
i can see
All i can feel
is just you...
So lost in your eyes
so found in your touch
i cannot hide this love
this total surrender, this complete
consumption...
My body so hard from nameless battles
so meaning less now
you...so yielding, so open
i am swallowed by your warmth
which surges and flows
up my entire being
i have reached heaven
in the depths of you
pushing forward
pulling back
we move perfectly together
bodies and breath in this ageless rhythm
that builds yet paralyzes
all thoughts..all time
until all i feel
is your tremble..my release
into that space
between heaven and earth
between seperation itself
falling back
back to this candlelit room
with a little sadness of seperation
following behind
that melts away
in your loving touch
as my lips taste your neck
and in this moment
i loveyou... forever....

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
nice images

with great warmth...*bluerains*

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