- Erotic Poetry
- The Collar Within
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Click hereThe Collar Within
By Ravaging Rhiannon
There is a collar around my neck.
A simple sign
of ownership.
But is it the symbol
that makes me yours?
or is it the chain that binds my heart?
The flames that leap from my skin each
time you touch me?
The spark of desire that ignites when
our lips touch?
The explosion of our passion
when I feel your large hard member
penetrating my soul?
I loose all control,
so completely filled,
with each rhythmic pounding
inside me.
I have given all to you.
The collar within
the heart,
the mind,
the soul,
of this slave
allows her to be posessed
totally
by the man she looks at with awe
her Master
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI think lifestylers should have potential partners or submissives read this and decipher the meanings. Is this just a poem or how you ache with steel around your neck?
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Anonymousover 18 years agoGood beginning...keep it up! A sincere, first hand expression can be felt throughout. The physical "member" and "pounding" seemed to begin to stray from the overall "emotional" context. Overall slave desire for her Master is well expressed. dsow
RhymeFairyover 18 years agoI think a lil more imagery
would have been great, but as it is
... still GOOD !!!
We hear the inner HER speaking out,
very passionate read here ...
Welcome to Lit. I like your style.
Just a lil more
Ummphhh and ya got it. *grins*
More Please ~
