- Erotic Poetry
- The Dominant
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You find a heart, it reflects yours
Slowly the days pass, lingering thoughts and passions
Sunny days, blooming flowers
Bright lights in the sky
Twinkling stars, beating hearts
Lowered eyes, flexing thighs
Soft cooing sounds, make their way to you
Soft caresses, spoken commands
Clearly answered, proud responses
Steel closing, leather tightens
Coolness felt on the skin
Binding, freedom, felt within
Aching souls, dreams felt
Fantasies spoken, passions explored
More commands
Lashes given, thank you heard
Approval seen in radiant orbs
Whispers, bated breath
Two become one
P Cruise
Copyright ©2004 P Cruise
- COMMENTS
RhymeFairyover 18 years agoI can feel the love for your sweet one.
Nice pen, and keep'm coming ~!!
A suggestion, new wording, metaphors and imagery
would make this sparkle and pack a punch.
I like the thoughts just needs a lil ummph ~
No offense intended~ Just me ...
*Smiles*
