- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Dream
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Click hereSwirling, swirling
Fog clouds the way
I don't know where I'm going
The beauty, beauty
All around me
Swirling and whirling
I can see the moon and stars
Shining brightly
To touch, to feel the cool water
Over my body
The grass damp with dew
To lay and feel the wind
Blowing ever so gently
The beauty, beauty
All around me
Swirling and whirling
I can see the moon and stars
Shining brightly
A lake, so peaceful and calm
To touch, to feel the cool water
Over my body
The grass damp with dew
To lay and feel the wind
Blowing ever so gently
A shadow
It comes to me
I am in heaven
- COMMENTS
Xectxny19Xover 19 years agoYou're such the picturesque writer aren't ya? Wonderful imagery as always!
bearleeover 19 years agoThird one I've read by you today-made a comment about the Dawn one for obvious reasons to myself-but this one is really nice-one more to go but so far, I think this would be my favorite
Vampiric_Mirageover 19 years agoI especially like the end of the poem. A subtle twist that leaves so much to the imagination of the reader. Well Done & Keep Writing!
