The Drop

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The second before the drop
Suspended
Between life and death
Today without tomorrow
Rope chaffing slightly
The smell of antiseptic all around
And knowing only silence
Till darkness falls.

The second before the drop
Endless
Frozen in time and space
Waiting for anything
A sound perhaps
Whispered words of solace
But none will come
When darkness falls.

The second before the drop
Perfection
Every act is done
A life completed
Good or evil pushed aside
Forgiven by default
No consequence but this
As darkness falls.

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
HoneyA : Wow !! Perfect

Observation !!! Your perception is sharper than mine !! Attagal !!!

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 9 years ago
@Ash

But did you see the sub, hogtied and suspended from the dungeon ceiling? Or would that be just me again? *adjusts glasses*

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
Excellent !

this Poem could be referring to a Hangman's execution or a Paratrooper droppin' into Enemy territory or an Olympic Diving competitor [ or as HoneyA has so aptly put it a Bungee jump ] : 5-ed .

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 9 years ago
Serious stuff

Not an upright jerker to be seen

No struggles in your rope play

I could almost, but not quite, see a bungee if I squinted, ever so hard

An interesting piece

Noose work!

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