- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Edge of my Rope
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Wistfully
I remember
in the quiet
in the dark
you
there
and me
extended
to the edge
of my rope
a noose
to lasso you in
keep you caught up
yet if unsuccessful
to hang myself
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoand on the edge of your seat. Ropes do not have edges.
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agoVery dark piece that kinda
haunts you after you read it.
I like it!
Nice work,
Thanks.
~ Jenn
dcpoet44almost 19 years agothis a very cool metaphor, and it took me a couple reads to see it. it has that very dark presense, and yet is taut in its script. there isn't much slack in this one. i sense it may have a reflective appearance in some form. i may be stretching the interpretation. excellent and very effective......don
