- Erotic Poetry
- The End
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The sensation blurs my vision,
Stops my breath halfway to my lungs.
I panic and second guess my decision.
My body begs for the torture to end,
Stars burst behind my eyes,
Back struggling to flex and bend.
I scream out loud,
As I thrash and grab,
Head ringing in a cloud.
Intense focus yet none at all,
Every touch leading me away,
Begging to just let me fall.
One touch the same as the last,
Yet this is the final drop,
Time splits and I am the present and the past.
The world bursts in pain that’s pleasure,
Heart both pounding and stopped,
Brain melted in this beautiful treasure.
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buttersover 14 years agohttp://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=32516444&postcount=2883
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