the first touch

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The first touch feels comfortable
Like a ripped faded tshirt
As your fingers softly brush against my neck
My mind starts racing
Then the heavy beating of my heart
That matches yours
Drowns out my thoughts
As your finger tips reach my lips
I feel like I am sinking into your body
They slowly part
And my breath rushes out
One more moment and your touch is on my tongue
It’s over
My brain shuts down
And my body takes over
I taste your skin
It is sweet
Slowly
Slowly
I move to match my lips to yours
Parted and moist they barely touch
We are silent
But the loud pounding of our hearts
The tip of your tongue caresses my upper lip
My body moves from warm to hot
It feels new and dangerous
We become stronger
Our kiss needier
Your hand moves from my cheek
To my hair
Pulling me in tighter
My hands move from my sides
Roaming your body
Caressing your arms
Feeling your strength
The warmth of you mouth
Makes me hotter
We speed up
Your hands move down my body
Feeling my curves
Softly cupping my breasts
I sigh
I slowly lift your shirt off
As your hand slips under my top
The feel of your skin on my breast
Sends a warm rush through my body
Slowly
Silently
We undress each other
I shiver and
You pull me close to your warm body
Our hands explore
Touching
Caressing
One another
You kiss my neck
My collarbone
As you gently push yourself into me
We remain silent
Only soft sighs
And moans
Escape our lips
As we begin our slow
Sweet
Movement
Our lips find each other again
Our tongues feel
And taste
I begin to feel warmer
As you squeeze me
And your hips continue
Their rhythm
I am enveloped in warmth
And a feeling of floating
As you break your rhythm
For three long thrusts
We kiss lightly
Gently
And fall asleep together
With the ripped tshirt comfort around us.

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2 Comments
WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
Try...

more descriptions along the lines of:

The first touch feels comfortable

Like a ripped faded tshirt

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Thoughts on a first poem

This is a work of straight description.

It merely "tells".

It does not "show" nor create emotion.

It is also written in the first person

which makes it harder for the reader to empathize.

You can spell and string words together,

now you need to learn to make them more interesting to your audience.

The best way to do that is to read, read, read, and then write!

And always remember that your honest opinion of your own work is what's most important.

(And if you ARE being honest with yourself,

you will almost never think that a poem cannot be improved.)

Keep writing!

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