The Flame

bythelovingsadist©

Two great stars once found their way,
Meeting under circumstance of gray;
Collision granted sparks to fly,
Erupting flames to soar on high.

Warmth and want consumed them both,
The flames to flare above sworn oaths;
Within the blaze the stars would dance,
Giving all to one brave chance.

Beyond all hope the stars did yearn,
Forgotten warmth upon them burned;
Lost in flames the stars did cry,
The time arrived to say goodbye.

The flame at last had run its course,
Yet in the stars lived no remorse;
For all that burned as stars came wake,
To ash they scattered, beyond escape.

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by Cleardaynow04/21/14

I prefer this of your two poems

I think it is incredibly difficult to carry a reader with you on poems that are archaic (flare above sworn oaths) or portentous (Love once shared to hold all the world balanced). You only have to losemore...

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