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Click hereThe Grim Reaper Don't Knock
Thailand 65
"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"
Whoring till broke.
Drunk and dumb, hooked tight
Little brown machine, ride the night.
Shutter awake, bamboo burnt knees
My dark mate, red coal glow.
Damn, time for "Wah" to go
Floats in dark shroud, no legs slow.
"A" framed, bone face.
Black clock scythe
time not moving.
death----standby.
hand is slow, extends
too long, bone, closer.
"Ah shit" crunched last words
Times up, screwed up good.
Bone to nail, slight death touch
cheap booze, hookers--had enough
BaBa8
Nicely done! Could have pertained to Manila just as well as Bangkok. Brought back memories. Thanks!
Damn good poem, and it's mentioned on literotica's poetry forum in the new poems review thread.