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Click hereI went to the sympathy section first
and then realized I needed “get well,”
but that wasn’t entirely right either
because you won’t.
You know that
I know that
hospice knows that.
So I’m not sure what fits…?
It doesn’t seem they reserve
special cards for those who know
they’re not coming back;
because really, what does one say?
I’ll miss you
you were great
enjoy the next life?
It all seems a little bit crass
when I’ll drive away in a caddy
while you’re laying back on a gurney
counting ceiling tiles and minutes
‘til your last breath.
You captured that awful feeling where you want to say something but it feels as though anything you say will be all wrong. Billie
it is not a bad poem, in fact, it is pretty good. But in a good poem, there can be mistakes. Did you mean to use "your"?
I know that spell check doesn't catch everything, but you should have caught that one!
good work
And so very moving, I grabbed a couple tissues just thinking about this. Those feelings of helplessness. CP
My wife is under hospice now. Watching the one you love slowly slip away (and it is slowly with Alzheimer's) is the hardest thing you will ever have to do. Stay with them and assure them of your love. Beautifully done. Thanks
When my uncle was at home and in the final stages of cancer, I dressed him--what was left of him--so my dad could take him to the Veterans hospital to die. I kept telling him he'd be okay, because what else could I say? We want to reassure a loved one and, yeah, we have odd thoughts, like greeting cards for the dying. Strong poem. Realistic.