The Hayfield

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Jim Dogget
Jim Dogget
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Oh, to be in England
Lying in the grass
Feeling all those seed heads
Tickling my arse
Hidden in the fescue
Where fucking is concealed
Rutting with a milkmaid
In a rutted field
No sound intrudes us in our bower
But wait, what’s that? Oh shit – the mower!

Jim Dogget
Jim Dogget
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Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
LOL

wonderful!!

but you shoulda used "ass"

;)

good work, you made rhyming fun, not tedious work that attempted to be concealed as seamless artsy poetry

maria

Victoria_LucasVictoria_Lucasover 17 years ago
Making good on a dare

You win! See all the nice poetry people here?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I laughed aloud

Thanks - keep writing and welcome to Lit.

Tess

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
humorous

I like witty humor mingled with erotic words (~_~) nice write! My mouth moves the same in 'bower' and 'mower' <grinin'

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fun

Welcome to the poetry side! A simple, clever piece that is well-constructed (though how you get "bower" to rhyme with "mower" I don't know!). Be sure to stop by the poetry forum to join discussions of the craft.

Fly

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