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Click herethey can snake out,
suck you in like a straw,
leaving only
the emptied husk
of your wrinkled skin.
A failed parachute.
if you write (or study) Eastern poetic forms because your poems are so spare and precise. This one does so much with so few words. I love poems that make every word count. And then of course, every word in this poem is true.
Great read with wonderful use of metaphor and simile. Thank you.