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Click hereIf I could go, and see what others see.
I just might recover something.
i could never grasp
the exuberant motivation that was required for complacency.
-its the only thing
I've never done. run
-The only thing ill never do. Perhaps?
Hard work kept me honest. In a way.
a hand in every accolade but
earning not a one.
A goal and worst fear the same: freedom.
someplace else
I might open my eyes wider and just see.
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postobitumalmost 19 years agoHmmm
I don't really get your poems today, it could just be me. What I do get is more of an aura of intellectual coldness or just plain mechanical uncaring from them though, so it's not like I totally just didn't take anything from your work. :) I will say on The Jack there were some grmmatical/punctuation errors (or what seemed like errors) that made it more difficult to read.
