The Last

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One fleeting compulsion
And crystal orbs shatter
The marble is littered
With glass glitter scattered

The bitter blood carmine
Hot tainted emulsion
Has painted me giddy
And nothing else matters


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KobaKobaabout 12 years ago

You have a gift for poetic compactness! Every word in the poem counts. Wonderful alliterations! Interesting rhymes. You make it seem easy but my guess is you work hard on your poetry. Well done! A 5!

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A FIT OF ANGER

could destroy a dream. TK U MLJ LV NV