- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Last Place
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touch me
in a way
I have not felt1
through skin
to spirit
yes
there
the last place
not consumed
by your soul
relieved
knowing
that together
we will always
fly2
1 in "Be a Man", by CremeBrule ©2004.
2 in "My Heart's Prayer", by champagne1982 ©2002.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.
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Anonymousalmost 19 years agowhat you said in the thread about the votes. Dont youknow the vote system here is screwed beyond belief? If you were proud of this poem when it has 11 5's, you should be proud of it no matter what. Dont base your self esteem on a vote system that is so seriously flawed if you do you will never amount to anything more than another Lit clickish poet...good luck
Anonymousabout 19 years agoGina, this is short but full of meaning! Simple n' great!
Ebby
of OM
Anonymousabout 19 years agoOf the ones that you posted today, I like this one the best. I agree with tt2u. This a perfect little piece.
