- Erotic Poetry
- The Lowly Cherry is Elevated
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Click herethe innocent fruit
swirled by my wet keen pink tongue
glassy-eyed, you're mine.
I love how you stare.
your lips parted, mouth arid.
all wet on this side.
you blink, back to earth.
my mouth has enclosed the fruit
to be the cherry...
"I wish this was you."
I stare at your tented crotch.
my eyes close slowly.
you now rise and come
closing the distance quickly.
fruit gives way to flesh.
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREover 16 years agoJust at the close of summer there seems to be a flourish (relatively speaking) of flora oriented erotic imagery – but it’s use could never be counted as out of season. It is the subtle and clever use of the imagery which allows the seconds of confusion to come at the end feeling like you too tasted something extra good.
One small comment. If (as it seems) the description comes from the perspective of the participant and not an observer, I would have omitted the two visual adjectives (my “pink tongue” and”glossy eyed” as you can’t actually see yourself at that moment.
BTW, you make me hungry.
