The Man of Mystery

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Haiku about a man dark and mysterious
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Lost in memories
He danced upon my Midnight
And held my soul bound.

He scooped me up tight
Held me breathlessly and cold
Yet, warmed me fully.

Breath upon my face
Chilled and dewy covered
Smiling and all is well.

His thick muscled arms
Enfolded me, lifting me
Bringing me t'ward Home.


His eyes of deep brown
So dark they pulled me inward.
Into his Dark Night.

Me, Captivated
Charmed, Naively unaware
Quickly caught, captured.

He took me Home bound
I had no thought to the "why"
But Quick Discovered!

He was mystery
Masqued male walking silently,
Carrying me forth.

Drugged with his raw scent,
Primal male hypnotizes
With his touch and look.

His Whispers echo,
Sounding inside my brain
Hypnotic word, "Mine!"

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MikeyDee76MikeyDee76over 5 years ago
Stunning.....

I'm sorry its taken me this long to get on to Literotica. I've been following your work on the 3DX forums and its always captivating to read. You have this knack or bringing the reader into the story and without warning it envelops your senses like a wave crashing gently over you.

Keep up the good work :)

Vaughan1Vaughan1over 5 years ago
Congratulations

This poem is beautifully written with a lot of thought.

Congratulations on your first successful publications on Literotica.

Well Done to you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
SUCKED in.....

Had ME within your first two stanzas.....

"Lost in memories

He danced upon my Midnight

And held my soul bound.

He scooped me up tight

Held me breathlessly and cold

Yet, warmed me fully."

Luv when i get sucked into a poem or story.... so quickly.

hmm, perhaps I shouldn't have read this one first.... raising expectations for the other 3 yet to be read; uh oh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Some nice lines

raw primal emotion trumps logic dear Sister

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